&&Ðяëāmÿ[ðòñò]
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Post by &&Ðяëāmÿ[ðòñò] on Jun 27, 2008 13:30:22 GMT -5
t h y n a m e ;; -- [Swiftkit;; Swiftpaw;; Swiftblaze;; Swiftstar]
m o o n s ;; -- [20 Moons]
s e x ;; -- [Male]
a l l e g i a n c e ;; -- [WestClan]
r a n k ;; -- [Leader]
p o w e r ;; -- [ignatius -- hot claws . . . with this ability, your claws are black, heated monsters ! similar to burning breath, your claws heat up to pack a powerful claw swipe. while they do not set on fire, they are very capable of starting fires against flammable surfaces.]
l o o k s ;; -- [There is not much to say about Swiftstar. He is different than most cats, thats for one, possesing blue and gray eyes, with a dull grey nose. His whiskers are white, with a couple black tints in them. His fur is an unusuall mixture of tabby markings in black and brown patched with a white under belly and white paws. His muzzle is also white, with a little bit of tan coloring at the roots of his whiskers. He is small, well musculed, and small, soft rounded paws. His tail is long, and black tabby marked. His ears are quite similar to his pelt, one being black tabby colored/marked, and the other being a sandy brown tabby colored/marked way. He is swift for his size and well balanced, able to balance himself even on the thinnest of tree branches. He is always keeping his pelt clean and it usually is never kept tidy. The padds of his paws are worn out and bloodied, though he is never bothered by it.]
d i s p o s i t i o n ;; -- [Smart and quick thinking, it is strange that Swiftstar knows so much at such a young age. He is a very kind and nice cat, with a soft and patient disposition. He will never turn any one away for any reason what so ever. He is gentle and understanding, loving to play with kits and help in training apprentices. That is not the only thing though, as he does have his moments, however small. He is very defensive, and will protect anyone in need of protecting. He is willing to die or go to extreme measures to protect someone, even those who are on the brink of death and has no chance of surviving. He keeps his friends close of coarse, but his enemies closer still. There is only, at the most, ten percent of evil within him. One day, he hopes to have a mate who he can love and care about and hopes to protect her just as well. He follows his warriors as part of them and not as a snotty boss. He keeps everything fair and is there to help in breaking up a fight if needed.]
t h e p a s t ;; -- [The past was never easy for Swiftstar, not since his mother died. He loved her dearly and for the short four moons that he spent with her, he was always happy. But keeping all his feelings bottled up inside, he realized that death was natural and came to every one and left it to rest. As an apprentice, Swiftstar was a very good listener, learning everything in the days that he was taught with memberance and meaning. He went through four different mentors, learning as much as he could, each mentor retired unexpectedly, most likely since they had nothing else to teach him. He loved each one like a father, who he never knew, and they all ment alot to him. As a warrior, Swiftstar was named Swiftblaze, for knowing the powers of fire and so quickly too. He was a strong warrior and many she-cats easily, mabey to easily, fell for him. When he was a deputy, he once had a mate, but she died in a territory fight with a loner who wanted to kill each cat and pin pointed her first. He never forgot about her, living every day with pain and yet a strange happiness that she was dead, she had died in peace after all. A few moons later and the deputy retired the day he was given an apprentice. It was strange how he was picked for Deputy that same day. He accepted the offer with pride and dignity though and always appreciated the clan for everything ever done.]
r p - e x a m p l e ;; -- [Swiftpaw padded into the Elders Den, the branches tugged at his fur as though saying that they wanted him to stay right there. He made his way over to a black and white tom, who was talking to a brown tabby tom, there discusion, Swiftpaw. The tabby calico apprentice smiled at both of them and dipped his head respectfully to the two Elders. "Hey Minnow-wind and Feralcrest. Would you mind telling me a story?" He asked. "About the great Firestar?" He asked, his fur sticking up with excitement. The two toms looked at each other and then back at Swiftpaw. "Alright." Minnow-wind meowed and flicked his tail. Feralcrest cleared his throat. "It all started on a bright sunny day in twoleg place." He started, but stopped when he noticed Swiftpaw's latest mentor, Owlflight. "I'm taking you out for training Swiftpaw. You can listen to their story later." She meowed, and turned away towards the camp entrance. Swiftpaw's ears went down to his cranium and he looked at his former mentors. "Well, I guess later than." He meowed, and turned away, padding outside of the camp with Owlflight.]
c o d e w o r d ;; -- [add when finished]
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Post by C A P E [penguin] on Jun 27, 2008 16:30:39 GMT -5
on hold for review -- however, I suggest making everything just a tid-bit longer :] Just in case.
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&&Ðяëāmÿ[ðòñò]
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Post by &&Ðяëāmÿ[ðòñò] on Jun 27, 2008 16:41:43 GMT -5
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